Comments on: The Fourth Estate Has No Respect For Perfectly Good Blackmail

By: Dranorter

Dranorter — Thu, 29 Nov 2012 17:11:13 +0000

Actually I take that back; though your more recent stuff is still emphasizing cheekbones over jawlines, the jawline is sometimes present.

By: Dranorter

Dranorter — Thu, 29 Nov 2012 17:07:20 +0000

I dunno about the anatomy per se (trying to guess what Enigma might have been bothered by; maybe the size of the shoulders? women have a tendency to smaller shoulders) but one thing you’re missing is the line of the jaw, which should extend more horizontally back from the chin. In a way that’s just a stylistic choice and you’re emphasizing the line from chin to cheekbone instead (after all, all cartoony styles oversimplify), but at times it makes the faces look very gaunt or strange. (And this seems to be true of your more recent pages as well.)

(Of course, the jawline doesn’t really show from a front view, I’m talking about side views.)

By: Jigsaw Forte

Jigsaw Forte — Wed, 25 Jul 2012 03:22:31 +0000

@Enigma: Lemme know if you still feel that way when you get up to the more recent strips.

Three and a half years must result in improvements SOMEWHERE…

By: Enigma

Enigma — Mon, 23 Jul 2012 22:08:21 +0000

I must comment fast time is not somthing that i have a lot of but i will say your human anatomy is very iffy with daisy i would advise awee bit of practice i realize i have not read through all of it yet but at this point its not great.

By: shadeus maximus

shadeus maximus — Thu, 14 Apr 2011 23:09:54 +0000

sadly, i havent gotten a hicky yet. and im 17 /_\